I’m no fan of Irving, but damn, there’s some truth to this codgery:
I’m no fan of Irving, but damn, there’s some truth to this codgery:

For the first time since 1977, the Pulitzer Prize committee has refused to name a winner for the Fiction prize. Karen Russell, Denis Johnson, and the ghost of David Foster Wallace are all kicking rocks.
Someone on Twitter suggested that no novel was named winner because all the good stuff is in YA these days. To that I say: aside from being marketed as adult literary fiction, how is Swamplandia! not (hyper-literate) YA?
A provocative essay by Toby Litt in Granta offers a picture of the way technology has and will continue to change how we read:
Readers more accustomed to screens – web pages, iPhone displays – will scan a page of text for its contents, rather than experience it in a gradual linear top-left to bottom-right way. This will make for increased speed and decreased specificity. These readers will be half-distracted even as they read; their visual field will include other things than just the text, because they won’t feel happy unless those things are there. A writer of long, doubling-back sentences such as Henry James will be incomprehensible to them. They won’t be grammatically equipped to deal with him. They won’t be neurologically capable of reading him. Their eyes will photograph fields rather than, as ours do, or did, follow tracks.
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Perhaps future writers will, therefore, create vague fields of possible meaning; more Charles Olson than Ezra Pound. The exact sequence of sounds, the precise inflection of grammar – these things will seem prissy. We will be back to the eighteenth century, pre-Flaubert.
Today I am thirty years old. Holy fuck.
Not gonna do one of those long rambling reminiscence posts. The last decade was pretty cray-cray but the thing I’m most pleased with is that I feel like my writing is finally good enough to make it. Where “it” is lots of money. Or, y’know, at least some kind of ego validation via publishing.
This is the decade when my True Life’s Work begins. Hopefully that involves writing stories and not washing dishes at Chipotle.
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Where does reading incomprehension end and racism begin? Many Hunger Games readers somehow managed to miss the fact that Rue and Thresh, the Tributes from District 11, are black. Their skin color was, as you’d expect, somewhat startling for these readers to discover on the big screen:
“Kk call me racist but when I found out rue was black her death wasn’t as sad,” wrote @JashperParas, who amended his tweet with the hashtag #ihatemyself.
Holy shit. Is this really where we are, America?
The article goes on to draw a depressing link between this attitude and the tragic case of slaughtered black teen Trayvon Martin:
“Awkward moment when Rue is some black girl and not the little blonde innocent girl you picture,” [Alana Paul tweeted].
“That tweet was very telling, in terms of a mentality that is probably very widespread,” says Adam. . . . “Remember that word innocent? This is why Trayvon Martin is dead.” As he says it, I am thinking the same thing: of our culture’s association of whiteness with innocence, of a child described without an accompanying adjective, of a child rendered insignificant and therefore invisible because of his or her particular shade of skin.
Was Hunger Games author Suzanne Collins actually making a subtle comment on race relations today?
I believe that Collins was well aware of what she was doing: after all, in the author’s imagining, Rue is herself invisible to most of the other “Hunger Games” characters, a quick-on-her-feet, resourceful “shadow” either unseen or unremarked upon by most everyone but the book’s protagonist and heroine, Katniss Everdeen. It’s a conceit that seems to have worked maybe a little too well.
Do authors have an obligation to make readers more aware of the race of non-white characters? I don’t know. I had no problem envisioning Rue and Thresh as black. Heroine Katniss Everdeen is even described in a way that suggests potentially non-Caucasian or mixed ancestry: she has “olive skin” and dark hair.
In my writing, I sometimes struggle with the problem of over-emphasizing the skin color of non-white characters. People of color certainly face the problem of being invisible, but is drawing excessive attention to skin color in fiction any better? Isn’t that bordering on tokenism, or fetishism of the “exotic” qualities of a character? I suppose if we’re going to err on one side or the other, increasing awareness is always better than maintaining the status quo of color blindness and the default of “white until proven black.”
I’ve been recently discussing how to work out plotting issues with a writer friend—the type of plot knots where you have a good idea of the beginning and end, but too many possibilities for how to get from A to Z—and realized I’ve come up with a few principles that work pretty well for me. These aren’t one-size-fits-all; they’re just ideas that may spark something with other writers.
In Zombie Novel, I originally had an ending sequence that worked, but felt a little too smooth: Protagonists A and B kill Antagonist X’s henchmen and get away mostly unharmed. I need the villain X to live and be present in the sequel, so although A and B have good reason to kill him, they can’t. But then I realized: A can do something to X that will keep him alive long enough to perform his role in the sequel, but also put a ticking clock over his head. Does it complicate things? Yes, a bit—now my plotting with X has to be tighter because he’s working under a literal deadline. But A’s arc also ends much more dramatically, and sets up interesting questions and ramifications in the sequel.
Sometimes we choose the simpler, smoother route with plotting because working out the details of a new complication is overwhelming. And I think in first drafts, that’s fine: the point is to get the damn thing down and tinker with it later. But when we spot the possibility to make things a lot more interesting by throwing in a complication, we owe it to the story to see how it plays out. Does the complication make the story more compelling by not letting characters take the easy route, or is it just complexity for complexity’s sake?
While writing the first draft of Zombie Novel, I had a scene where all my protagonists survive a desperate chase and reach their car—and I knew someone had to be waiting at that car to throw a wrench into their escape. The problem: who was the most interesting choice? Every existing villain was, at that point, tied up in other plots. I could invent a new villain, but that didn’t feel shocking and intriguing enough. Villains are more effective when they’re someone we already know. What if it was a character who’d been introduced earlier, someone who had seemed fairly minor? Whose presence would initially be startling but then, in hindsight (and with a few revision tweaks), make total sense? There was someone who fit the bill surprisingly well, and once I chose to reuse that character and develop her role more substantially, other plot elements began clicking into place.
A huge part of the fun of writing for me is the invention: characters, conflicts, worlds, all of it. Sometimes, though, rather than work with what we’ve got, we creative, generative types have a tendency to invent new things to solve problems that could, with some elbow grease, be solved by existing characters and other elements.
Sometimes plotting feels like I’m holding an almost-finished Rubik’s cube, and as I near completion I lose the patience and discipline to flick those last few squares into place. Because once I start shifting one part, the whole thing could get messed up. It’s easier to just invent new things to solve problems rather than try to finagle the existing elements into a satisfying solution. Of course, inventing stuff to solve immediate problems just increases complexity later on, and results in an unsatisfying conclusion for readers…
In my friend’s book, the problem involves a pivotal role that could be performed by several characters, and one possibility is the MC. IMO, whenever it’s possible to more deeply involve the MC in the central conflict, it is probably a good idea to do so (barring complexity for complexity’s sake). Does the MC already have a damn good reason to be involved in the conflict? Would it be more interesting if they didn’t have a choice? Would making the MC the key to a certain conflict increase the pressure, the sense of urgency, and raise the stakes? Even outside the thriller genre, urgency and stakes drive reader interest.
This principle sounds self-evident, but you’d be surprised how often writers let it slip—even the big guns, like, say, George R.R. Martin. Remember when the A Song of Ice and Fire books were about Jon and Dany, the Starks and the Targaryens and the Lannisters? Martin let his love of invention get the best of him and filled his saga with countless minor characters, and now those characters and their plots and subplots within subplots are getting more screentime than the MCs. The central conflict is all but forgotten.
Our MC is—theoretically; ideally; possibly—the character most readers will most identify with. There’s a reason we chose them as the MC. There’s a reason the narrative revolves around them. It doesn’t always need to be a literal, plot-driven reason; maybe the MC represents the themes of the novel rather than functions as the actual lynchpin of the plot. Still, it is almost always the better narrative choice to force the MC to be an active participant in events rather than an observer, or a warm body which things happen to. Give them momentum; don’t let them move forward via inertia.
Hey Girl, saw your e-book is half price now. I bought it twice.
— Ryan Gosling (@GoslingLitAgent) February 24, 2012